CrispyZero's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Face Palm Story]

I like.

Since there wasn't a lot else to comment on, imma just gonna reviews this purely on the animation. The animation was decently made, it flowed quite easily and looked, well, animated. Seeing more like this would definitely be a plus.

However! One thing that is always sure to annoy me is a flash being mute, it would've been made much funnier if it had accompanying sound effects to go with the animation, and also would've been funnier if the preloader at the start was a real one.

Overall, on the sliding scale of how good animations are, with the very bottom being the Flash equivalent of a PowerPoint Slideshow, and the very top being Super Smash on this very website, I would place this one in the exact middle, stepping a single toe over in the direction of good animations.

Cesarean-Pizza responds:

Thank you for the fair review. As soon as I find aproprait sound effects I can add them. As for the preloader... I'm not sure if I can get one using Pencil.

As I said. Just testing this programs limitations.

[Staying Home.]

Pretty unusual.

Don't completely understand it, but I like it, especially the FBF of the blinking eye at the beginning, the rest of the animation could've been better though. Still, if this makes it through, which I'm sure it will, I might submit a suggestion for the Animutations section.

Mechabloby responds:

animutations? it's not one of those at all - it's experimental D:

lol glad that you gave a fairly positive review: I was just wantint to try out new things, so I did what I did - took some interesting shots of places around my computer desk. I like the result, tbh.

Thanks for the 6 :)

[We practice melting?]

Yes and No.

Excellent FBF, terrible as a standalone movie. I gave it a 3 though so don't worry.

TreasurePlanet responds:

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well thanks anyway dude.
Im glad the animation wasn't too bad.
I will definetly push myself for my next flash.

[gears of douches]

Good effort.

I can tell from the animation and length of this flash that you clearly spent more time on it than the average first-time flash. However is still isn't perfect, for example the animation doesn't flow well and the voice recording is far too scratchy and hurt my ears whenever they made a gunshot.

However, with more practice and better audio recording you could make far better things than this.

Also, you're badly in need of a preloader, you can download the Newgrounds one from this downloads page.

hammityville responds:

yeah but i use toon boom i dont know how to put one on

[Insults Hurt :"(]

Well..

Not terrible, but not great. Although the animation was decent, the art looked too sloppy. And also, stickmen. Not much detail required.

And for a preloader, download the Newgrounds one.

Danimation4real responds:

I looked around but I couldn't find one. That's why I said,"any referals?" Would you mind giving me a link?

[Sonic Vs. Metal Sonic]

Thumbs up from me.

Pretty good animation, I wasn't aware you were working on something else.

Also, I just noticed this but it reminds me an awful lot of a flash I'm working on.

Lukeyjohnno responds:

Haha, thanks Crispy ;)

[[ Prototype Parody ]]

An ok flash.

Although this was a pretty good flash animation it feels like you cut out loads of scenes, you should add more scenes in.

neenawgames responds:

I might...

I can't be arsed to be honest... I'd much rather start something new and better :P

[Madness killzorzzzz test]

Submit it when finished.

A don't have any problems with this flash other than its length. As a generalization it's never a good idea to submit an unfinished flash to Newgrounds, especially if you're going to submit the same thing only finished later.

Apart from that the animation was sort of what a Madness flash would look like and would be pretty cool were it not over in five seconds.

katsirostudios responds:

ya, i tryed to submit it to the alphas but it dosent work right now

[The Programmers]

Almost good.

I thought it was sort of funny but when it ended it felt like it was missing a punch-line. The art and animation is acceptable but could use improving, and the voice acting was pretty bland.

GoldZee responds:

Thanks for the advice =D