CrispyZero's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Reunion]

Excellent.

Short, but very powerful, I like it. Nice job.

Also, nice animating style.

[Fighting Club]

Good effort.

While I can see that you put a lot of effort in the FBF of the stickmen, the animation just isn't fluid enough, doesn't really look like it's moving.

Also it all happens too quickly and doesn't look very coherent.

[We practice melting?]

Yes and No.

Excellent FBF, terrible as a standalone movie. I gave it a 3 though so don't worry.

TreasurePlanet responds:

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well thanks anyway dude.
Im glad the animation wasn't too bad.
I will definetly push myself for my next flash.

[gears of douches]

Good effort.

I can tell from the animation and length of this flash that you clearly spent more time on it than the average first-time flash. However is still isn't perfect, for example the animation doesn't flow well and the voice recording is far too scratchy and hurt my ears whenever they made a gunshot.

However, with more practice and better audio recording you could make far better things than this.

Also, you're badly in need of a preloader, you can download the Newgrounds one from this downloads page.

hammityville responds:

yeah but i use toon boom i dont know how to put one on

[Insults Hurt :"(]

Well..

Not terrible, but not great. Although the animation was decent, the art looked too sloppy. And also, stickmen. Not much detail required.

And for a preloader, download the Newgrounds one.

Danimation4real responds:

I looked around but I couldn't find one. That's why I said,"any referals?" Would you mind giving me a link?

[Sonic Vs. Metal Sonic]

Thumbs up from me.

Pretty good animation, I wasn't aware you were working on something else.

Also, I just noticed this but it reminds me an awful lot of a flash I'm working on.

Lukeyjohnno responds:

Haha, thanks Crispy ;)

[[ Prototype Parody ]]

An ok flash.

Although this was a pretty good flash animation it feels like you cut out loads of scenes, you should add more scenes in.

Neelesh responds:

I might...

I can't be arsed to be honest... I'd much rather start something new and better :P

[SSB Revolution]

Strange.

I can't quite decide whether I like this or not, on one hand I like how abstract and nonsensical it is. On the other hand I hate how abstract and nonsensical it is, so I'm in a bit of a pickle.

Whilst I don't like the drawings too much, I do like the animations of them being drawn, especially the bigger ones like Tabuu. Although I got sick of seeing everything shape tween after a minute which seemed a really boring way to start.

Overall, I'd give it a five based on the fact that I don't know whether I like it or not.

[Madness killzorzzzz test]

Submit it when finished.

A don't have any problems with this flash other than its length. As a generalization it's never a good idea to submit an unfinished flash to Newgrounds, especially if you're going to submit the same thing only finished later.

Apart from that the animation was sort of what a Madness flash would look like and would be pretty cool were it not over in five seconds.

katsirostudios responds:

ya, i tryed to submit it to the alphas but it dosent work right now

[The Programmers]

Almost good.

I thought it was sort of funny but when it ended it felt like it was missing a punch-line. The art and animation is acceptable but could use improving, and the voice acting was pretty bland.

GoldZee responds:

Thanks for the advice =D